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Her Eyes

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while roaming
fields of amber brown
i lose myself
A haiku under the loose definition of one. (Modern haiku doesn't have to be 5-7-5, rather emphasizes being under 17 syllables. I still love 5-7-5, but this worked so much better this way.) If the loose definition bothers you, then consider it a micro-poem. ;)

For my darling ~Jesiryu :heart:
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