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The next part in Walter's story. Every vampire has a turning story and doesn't it figure, every time I give my vampires a female maker, they're royal bitches from hell. I apologize if this seems like a stereotype. One of these days, I'll write more about Ophelia from Toronto to make up for it.
Makes good ol' Helen Banks an irony and a half, though, doesn't it?
Mature content warning for very brief mentions of vampire/human sex.
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Update: Heavily edited this part because it needed it.
Give a gal your feedback and let me know if it needs anything else fixed?
Thanks for those of you who have helped me.
The next part in Walter's story. Every vampire has a turning story and doesn't it figure, every time I give my vampires a female maker, they're royal bitches from hell. I apologize if this seems like a stereotype. One of these days, I'll write more about Ophelia from Toronto to make up for it.
Makes good ol' Helen Banks an irony and a half, though, doesn't it?
Mature content warning for very brief mentions of vampire/human sex.
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Update: Heavily edited this part because it needed it.
Give a gal your feedback and let me know if it needs anything else fixed?Thanks for those of you who have helped me.
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Just as hit feet hit the ground Was the only error I noticed.
Walter's story has a lot of appeal. And there must surely be a lot of confused vampires out there - the old "what am I, evil or what?" thing going on. lol. As for female makers, I find it hard to believe that the usual vampire could be anything else. The only other alternative seems to be the "turning to save them from death", which as depicted often backfires leaving a wild animal on the vamp's hands, and not the human they once loved. As most any other action resulting in a new vampire seems to be derived from pure selfishness, royal bitches from hell seems an appropriate description!
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Walter's story has a lot of appeal. And there must surely be a lot of confused vampires out there - the old "what am I, evil or what?" thing going on. lol. As for female makers, I find it hard to believe that the usual vampire could be anything else. The only other alternative seems to be the "turning to save them from death", which as depicted often backfires leaving a wild animal on the vamp's hands, and not the human they once loved. As most any other action resulting in a new vampire seems to be derived from pure selfishness, royal bitches from hell seems an appropriate description!
k